Nightfall
Tells me…
It will soon be day.
This winter
Tells me…
Spring is on its way.
Past failure
Tells me….
I can do it,
If only I tried again.
Closing distance
Tells me….
I have come a long way.
I fear not failure pain or misery
For they reassure me….
I haven’t given up yet.
I will survive,
No matter what comes my way.
SUPERCALIFRAGILISTICEXPIALIDOCIOUS 
if only we could know what/who that something was/is 🙂
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Attagirl!! I’m so proud of you, my friend…..
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Yeah! You go girl!!! 😀 I can comment once again!!! 😀
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hmm…maybe sometimes itz not just about survival….
maybe itz a case of owning up past mistakes and standing up to it and promising urself a fresh beginning..
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Is this post related to your exams? I forgot to wish you…all the very best for your exams.
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Excellent poem. I am assuming that when you say “I will survive…” you mean the survival of the ‘I’ as before it was before whatever happened. Survival of our physical form is not very difficult (though you just might differ as a doc), the trick lies in trying to get through life on our terms, uncorrupted by evil external influences. Failure/pain/misery have a bad propensity of killing a part of us. But yes, we shall fight, and we shall survive 🙂
May the Force be with you!
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Atul Sabnis:
I am happy that some one/thing is still talking to me.
LazyLeo:
I hope its worth it.
Wishfulthiker:
Yeays!!!!
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Ginkgo:
May be!
S-E-J:
No but thanks.
Obi Wan:
Thanks.
My sentiments exactly.Whatever authority my little experience gives me,I can say with conviction that the body can endure a lot physically if it is mentally and emotionally sound.
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I needed to hear that today! Thanks.
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//I will survive,
No matter what comes my way//
Right on.
Fight on.
🙂
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as long as we’re alive, there’s always another chance, there’s always hope.
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beautiful
I fear not failure pain or misery
For they reassure me….
I haven’t given up yet.
I will survive,
No matter what comes my way.
LUVD these lines…
wish u all the very best
Cheers
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N:
Thanks.
Sometimes Saintly Nick:
You are welcome.
Vikram:
🙂
Abaniko:
True that.
Puneet:
Thanks, and to you.
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quite a fan following u have going! nice poem.
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Don’thaveaclue:
Thanks.I don’t know about fan following.These are very nice patient and encouraging people.I wonder how much longer they will endure me and my desperate attempt at poetry *cheeky grin*.
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Who is your informant? Would you mind leaning him/her/it to me for a while?
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lovely and I am sure we can endure a lot more *evil grin*
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this post tells me
it made you feel good,
this post tells me
I need to post a comment
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AFJ:
If only I knew,definitely you could have him/her/it.
Biju:
Thanks…:)
Green:
This post sure did make me fell good.Well if it made you leave a comment then this post must be telling you all the right things.
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Fantastic!! Way to go, man!! 🙂
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nice poem but i’m having a terrible bacl ache:(
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Rita:
Thanks
Dwaipayan:
Just out of curiosity,what does your back pain have to do with my post?
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excellent! aint no better feeling.
well there are a few. But this one of confidence and reassurance is right up there with the rest of them!
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I can do it,
If only I tried again.
—
who really does?
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Mother’s face
tell me
I will always be loved by someone.
A flower of rose with thorn
tell me
happiness and sorrow go hand in hand
Fight with sister/brother
tells me
fight can increase the level of closeness
My boss’s face
tells me
worse is yet to come
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Archster:
True that..:)
Rohit:
You have done too.You just don’t know when.
ATG:
🙂
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amusing
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I have come a long way.
I fear not failure pain or misery
For they reassure me….
I haven’t given up yet.
I will survive,
No matter what comes my way.
Oh yeah…you’ll survive…dont worry about it 🙂
Nice poem!!
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oops!!! spontaneous outflow of powerful emotions that what words …..but u give us information too …….
wonder how i got the words mixed up …..
cya
Take care girl
Ash
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EU tell me………u like to pen down comfortably in poetry or prose …..because both of the genres suits u quite well ….
like wordswoth said ….sponataneuos outflow of powerful information (don’t know whether recollected in tranquility or not)
u echo keats girl …..ode to the west wind
“O Wind,
If Winter comes, can Spring be far behind?”
Ash
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Death:
What is amusing?
ArzOOn:
Thanks..:)
Ash:
Penning down has been an experience.I am more of a conversationalist.This is a very new experience and I am loving it.Thanks for your kind words.I guess in this part of the world weather is such a huge deal its inevitable to echo in everyone’s mind.Don’t worry..the message came through.:)
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This is beautiful. Simply beautiful. I keep coming back to read this….
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well this gave me strength today
Man! U r powerful! 🙂
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Hey EU,
Just to tell you, how my predicts fared:
I said 2:0, the last test being drawn. It reversed last test they won and others they drew. But still believe they hit themselves on the foot by giving the wickets they did.
Sachin…wala…bola thha na…now everyonez saying that.
I said Shoaib’s gonna be the key, but we have to be careful abt the other end. Shoaib was difficult but we survived while the other end took the game.
So those were I feel accurate predicts…..but you know and I know, how we are feeling right now…right???
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EU, I don’t think so!
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Casablanca:
Thanks…:)
Koi Paheli:
I am glad,thanks.
S-E-J:
Your evaluations were right.Can’t say the same about your predictions..:p.Hmm we will just have to wait and see what happens after the 6th.
Rohit:
Are you saying,you have never tried to make up with an angry friend,sit for an exam again that you might have failed.That people don’t pick up the pieces of their broken lives to survive?That one failure can put one so down that they never try again?
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Yes. Just that. Exclude making up with friends.
And who said one failure can put you down so much! Did I mean that.. Nahi re..
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Rohit:
Then what did you mean?Did I totally misunderstand you?Hmm, kabhi phursat ho to samjhana..Cheers.
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Hmm.. yes you did. anyways. probably i wrote it in a way that it was never clear.. hehee..
PS: I suddenly dont want to grow up! as you wrote on my blog.. damn.. i have always wanted to.. but this Di’s wedding thing is scaring me a lot.. how will i manage without her! 😦 Thats why!
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Rohit:
Chal chod may be we both misundertsood each other.
You know the next few days you will have to shoulder a lot of responsibilty.Physical duties and mental one’s.Some one in the family has to hold all of you guys together and I feel the onus will be on you.I know you have your own insecurities,your own emotional turmoil,but you are a lot stronger than you think you are.
Its a very speacial day for your sister..I know Ive said this before and I say it again..be the support and strength she needs because she needs it most now.
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you are
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Death:
I am what?Leaving cryptic messages again?
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Death:
Oh now I get it.I am amusing..and you are confusing.*frown*
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one of my favourite things about your blog is the title in itself! 🙂 and nice poem too. 😉 keep up the cheer, and nail dem exams.
n
Sorry N your original comment had to go..It had my name plastered all over it.I don’t know if you will even come back here..but if you do I just want you to know..this was the time you were irritating me by coming over and busting my anonymity..I am so happy you started blogging yourself..I know you now understand…cos you know what it is like..
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