Don’t know what it is I feel
Wonder if I will ever feel like this again
I am not too pleased,
But I want to look back someday.
When the heart misses a beat,
When I just cannot care,
When I see through the pretence,
When I feel the shears through my skin.
When this pain feels sweeter,
Than what I feel within.
My tears have run dry.
Yet I hang on to the last of me.
I want to remember this day,
Lest I tread upon this path again.
SUPERCALIFRAGILISTICEXPIALIDOCIOUS 
never wrote it like this; never forgot those days 🙂
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What happened???
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ouch.
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Edu…Now, don’t tell me you composed this poem because you felt hurt that i called your friend dumb.:–)
I’d recieved such comments on my space and i felt this was a similar comment from some prankster. Sorry if it were a known person.
Hi anonymous, i hereby certify that you are not dumb anymore, and that you may continue to bombard this place with your queries and messages.
By the way, i have a similar question that obi wan raised? …..Hope everything is fine.
Do smile.:–)
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Atul Sabnis:
Hmmm.
Obiwan:
Felt poetic last night.:)
Wishfulthinker:
Indeed.
Vishwa:
P is a prankster alright, but he is a friend of mine here.Don’t worry, I’ve shooed him off my blog.Everything is I suppose the way it should be.I am smiling don’t you worry.That hardly costs anything.
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“I want to remember this day,
Lest I tread upon this path again”
I reckon that’s the best thing to do and the best way to use our experiences.
Good poem.
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Eew.
Sab theek hai?
I wouldn’t want to “remember” any particular day…given the stuff that happens everyday.
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Sometimes, even if you dont want to remember something, it remembers you. Know what I mean…
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Greensatya:
Painful, but a good way to remember what went wrong and to try and not do it again.
Thanks.
Rohit:
Sure..:)
Casablanca:
You bet!
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Trust you me , chances are you will tread upon this path again … some mistakes are not supposed to teach you a lesson…
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That was nicely put.
But If such events happen, I would like to use the recycle bin of my brain.
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I know what you mea…*Sigh!*
Well written.
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Ab bol bhi do kya ho gaya??
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Ford Perfect:
Even if it is you second, no actually 4th time that you give yourself another chance and yet things don’t work out the way you would like them to? I do want to learn, you see.
SEJ:
Thanks.The recycle bin sounds like an idea.
Rita:
Thanks, sigh!
Arz000n:
Abh samajh bhi jao, kya ho gaya!
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UPDATE!
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