Saving a piece of me.

Don’t know what it is I feel
Wonder if I will ever feel like this again
I am not too pleased,
But I want to look back someday.
When the heart misses a beat,
When I just cannot care,
When I see through the pretence,
When I feel the shears through my skin.
When this pain feels sweeter,
Than what I feel within.
My tears have run dry.
Yet I hang on to the last of me.
I want to remember this day,
Lest I tread upon this path again.
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15 responses to “Saving a piece of me.

  1. never wrote it like this; never forgot those days 🙂

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  2. Edu…Now, don’t tell me you composed this poem because you felt hurt that i called your friend dumb.:–)
    I’d recieved such comments on my space and i felt this was a similar comment from some prankster. Sorry if it were a known person.
    Hi anonymous, i hereby certify that you are not dumb anymore, and that you may continue to bombard this place with your queries and messages.

    By the way, i have a similar question that obi wan raised? …..Hope everything is fine.
    Do smile.:–)

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  3. Atul Sabnis:
    Hmmm.

    Obiwan:
    Felt poetic last night.:)

    Wishfulthinker:
    Indeed.

    Vishwa:
    P is a prankster alright, but he is a friend of mine here.Don’t worry, I’ve shooed him off my blog.Everything is I suppose the way it should be.I am smiling don’t you worry.That hardly costs anything.

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  4. “I want to remember this day,
    Lest I tread upon this path again”

    I reckon that’s the best thing to do and the best way to use our experiences.

    Good poem.

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  5. Eew.

    Sab theek hai?

    I wouldn’t want to “remember” any particular day…given the stuff that happens everyday.

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  6. Sometimes, even if you dont want to remember something, it remembers you. Know what I mean…

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  7. Greensatya:
    Painful, but a good way to remember what went wrong and to try and not do it again.
    Thanks.

    Rohit:
    Sure..:)

    Casablanca:
    You bet!

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  8. Trust you me , chances are you will tread upon this path again … some mistakes are not supposed to teach you a lesson…

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  9. That was nicely put.
    But If such events happen, I would like to use the recycle bin of my brain.

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  10. I know what you mea…*Sigh!*
    Well written.

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  11. Ab bol bhi do kya ho gaya??

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  12. Ford Perfect:
    Even if it is you second, no actually 4th time that you give yourself another chance and yet things don’t work out the way you would like them to? I do want to learn, you see.

    SEJ:
    Thanks.The recycle bin sounds like an idea.

    Rita:
    Thanks, sigh!

    Arz000n:
    Abh samajh bhi jao, kya ho gaya!

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