This is what winning must feel like.
Didn’t know if I had the strenght,
But wanted to break free.
Hopes, desires, yearnings,
Confusions, confessions.
Wanting my place,in the unknown deeper corners.
Difficult path to tread upon,
No doubt.
But then simple, life has never been.
Faith in my convictions,
Fighting one odd against another.
Step by step,
I come closer to my goal.
My happiness knows no bound,
This is what winning must feel like.
I come face to face,
With those very unknown corners
that I have yearned for so long.
Only to see another,beat me
To the very place that I belong.
Where do I really belong..
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SUPERCALIFRAGILISTICEXPIALIDOCIOUS 
nice poem…if its your own creation i suggest you to post more such writings in the future…the last 2 lines are beautifull…ciao
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Edu, the last two posts and this one are sixers out of the stadium. Good stuff.
Who’s it that makes you write these poems? I bet, there’s someone (or many) who pisses you off and then you come out with beauties like these? Whoever they are, tell them my hi. Love them. They make a poet out of Edu, haha.
Seriously, this is authentic stuff. Keep it coming.
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Harry Potter:
Thanks, yes it is my own writing.
Vishwa:
Hey nice to see you again.Thanks Vishwa.I do love them, and no they don’t piss me off.They just make me realise a thing or 2 about me.
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Well, you live and you learn. Or you live and you don’t learn. But you’re living. Som you must be doing something right. I think. Confused? Don’t worry, I is confused meself. 😀
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Harry Potter:
You have enable comment moderation on your blog.Which is why we can’t see any of our comments.You might want to go to your settings and moderate our comments or get rid of that option totally.Well in anycase..I want you to know that I was very flattered to see you reproduce one of my poems on your posts.Thanks.
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Discovered your blog through Bharani’s. Very impressive writing skills you have. Probably you should start thinking of writing a book, prose or poetry..either will do.
-Vishy
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Wishfulthinker:
Even if I am I don’t know it.Shall we speak again once we see the light?
Vishy:
Thank-you,:)
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Excellent! Thank you.
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Keep pressing on!
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Sometimes Saintly Nick:
Thanks.
Abaniko:
Doubt I have it in me.
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confoosing.. does it mean, you never win the simple life then?
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I feel like composing a song with these lines! 😀
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Too good…Keep writing such creative items. Expressing your emotions so poetically is a gift…
-Bharani.
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Wbix:
Would be more interesting to know your interpretation.Wouldn’t want to confuse you further with my input.
Rohit:
Then go right ahead.Send me a copy.:)
Bharani:
Thank-you.So nice to see you back.:)
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Only to see another,beat me
To the very place that I belong.
Just grab hold of the undies of whoever this “another” is and kick the butt with all your strength…thts wht I do all the time….people call me undy-grabber-n-butt-kicker 😀
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Only if i knew how to *sulks*
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Arz000n:
Hmm, seems like I might not have to after all.I think all good things take time.But you rock on.
Rohit:
Oh its ok.Apna bhi time ayega.
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Hi, me back after a break. Nice poem though and as usual I am lost !
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GreenSatya:
Well-come back.Thanks..:)
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I feel the feeling…
And would totally have written this if i could do the writing…
Basically I loved it! 🙂
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See, i read this article http://news.yahoo.com/s/csm/20060410/cm_csm/yprice;_ylt=AoEVfIdqKkCCABj_eY4q0l_9wxIF;_ylu=X3oDMTA5aHJvMDdwBHNlYwN5bmNhdA–
and then i feel tht winning isnt important at all, desiring stuffs isnt right, going after ‘material goals–the ones society brandished as great isnt it, but personal happiness is. I suppose i have a luxurious life in comparison and hence my mind desires more and keeps straying from simple life. Simple is too complicated. It would be horrible too to call the life of these ppl simple and yet…
simple is difficult eh?
i say stop… i am confusing myself 😉 hey come up with a male bashing saga again! wat’s with you and posting dunno what poems!! 😉
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yeah i came here after a long time too. via green’s blog.
nice peice of writing. kinda sad i feel.
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and while scrolling through your blog, your latest post seems like the latest episode linked to this…
http://medocuk.blogspot.com/2006/03/one-step-closer.html
somehow i feel…
wadda ya say?
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this is the first time I am reading a poem on your blog. Lovely! Keep them coming 🙂
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Karuna:
Thanks..yeah doesn’t the feeling really suck sometimes?
Wbix:
Interesting,its good to do some introspection sometimes.Hehe..yeah male bashings was never given up upon.
Koi Paheli:
Hiya, you did seeem to have got lost.Your URL was playing up too.Couldn’t access your blog.Nice to see you back.In London still?
Hey don’t feel sad,I did too when I wrote it..but then there is always some thing for everyone.So have faith.
Hmm the 2 poems do seem to have a common theme..but that wasn’t the intention or the motivation.
Rita:
Really? Hmm,so you have missed my previous masterpieces? LOl..thanks *cheeky grin*
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First time here. Nice poem, enjoyed it thoroughly.
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There is really no option except to keep fighting . You may lose a couple of battles, but at least you will have the satisfaction of having fought well 🙂
I too am kind of back after a break, have been busy fighting some battles of my own:-)
May the Force be with you.
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Kaunquest:
Thank you.:)
ObiWan:
Hey long time,yeah didn’t see you around.Hmm, I agree..but there are some things best left alone.Its hard when one isn’t really sure though.Nice to see you back.
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