I want to write a story,
May be even poetry.
So many thoughts,
Clear my head, I ought.
I need a new perspective.
Lose the habits that are restrictive.
Some new target, I need to set,
Work hard towards a winner’s mindset.
Dreams alone don’t take you too far,
Only flash stars in your eyes from afar.
So what is the deal?
Some one has to get real.
I wanted to write a story
May be even poetry.
Instead I write this rhyme,
A feeble first attempt of mine.
Time to be kind to you,(So I stop)
Sayonara, good-bye, Adieu.
Over a cup of coffee.
Filed under Life
ME FARASHT 🙂
work hard towards the winner’s mindset. because you already have the mindset.
nice first attempt, btw.
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it may not be the poem of this century, but what matters is that you are expressing your heart and you are writing. keep doing so. one day you’ll rename yourself educatedunemployedpoet
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N:
Thank ye, thank ye 🙂
Dwaipayan:
I was hoping more like, educated-employed-overpaid-queen-of-Sheba.But that doesn’t seem like the plan you have for me.:P
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What man?!! You are now on the get-real bandwagon? *sigh*
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i look forward to the story…
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Wishfulthinker:
Sometimes that is also good no?
Atul Sabnis:
I think Im writing it as it comes.Read along.:)
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EU, EU, EU
Doctor, writer, asrpiring poet…phew.
What would you do without this blog,
Life would have been a marathon slog.
A dream, a parallel world, a mirror – what do you seek?
these words of your’s prvodie an insightful peek!
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Pratik:
Aspirations indeed are high,
Doctor yes,but poet my my!
I love this blog,
To maintain it I slog.
It is only happiness I seek.
Much obliged, you cared to peep!
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Did i say that me a poetry lover,EU?
‘d love to see more works from you!
take care
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the feeble rhyme is very cute i assure you.
Now try poety, im sure itll be beautiful 🙂
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Gangadhar:
Nice to know.Take care you too.
Karuna:
I will do.Thank-you.
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Nice one…
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Simple yet imaginative:)
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Sunrise:
Thank-ye!
Shama:
Thank-ye..:)
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lol!!! this one was good! 🙂
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Now, can you write a poem on blogging please. Something as cute as this one. 🙂
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Nice 🙂 … You are learning fast …
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Grey Shades:
Yeah the laugh is just right,I did have fun while at it.
Abaniko:
That is a thought indeed.Shall try it some time.:)
Ford Prefect:
I was taught well by the great sensei. 😉
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I can see lot of meaning behind those rhymes. Good poetry.
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Greensatya:
Thanks.:)
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you carry on scribbling gal, oover a cup of coffee 🙂
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Amarula:
I have indeed got carried away, as might be evident in my next posts.
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