09.14.06
A moment to cherish.
I remember each time
I danced with you.
The smell of your hair
The sweat on your brow.
Your arms held out
I’d twirl into you.
A thousand times
I have heard that score.
I feel the beats
Deep within my soul.
My feet have danced
Till my toes got sore.
I want to hear our song
Just one more time.
Feel my body against yours
And dance to the tune.
Can we recreate the magic,that
Which was yours and mine.
Sometimes Saintly Nick said,
September 14, 2006 at 8:23 am
Wonderful words—they bring back memories that I treasure.
Janefield said,
September 14, 2006 at 11:15 am
very nice indeed
educatedunemployed said,
September 14, 2006 at 11:18 am
Nick:
Thank you.Happy memories?!
Janefield:
Thanks.
WishfulThinker said,
September 14, 2006 at 1:54 pm
Wah! Wah!! Beer ab really mangta hai I;m telling you. Sach mein. Beer lao! Beeeeeeeeeer!!!!…………bhery naishe…eduuuuu….bheru bhootiphully *hic* you said louwly *hic* things…ok baaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhyeeee
Appu said,
September 14, 2006 at 6:00 pm
Devdas … i agree with wishful thinker, u need to get urself a drink, and just drown in it for sometime. ever seen the movie HITCH?? i am that consultant:))
educatedunemployed said,
September 14, 2006 at 8:08 pm
Wishfulthinker:
With that slurring speech, I doubt you need any more beer.
Appu:
Aha,just a drink?!
greensatya said,
September 14, 2006 at 10:32 pm
Wow, speechless!! You are real good at writing these.
educatedunemployed said,
September 15, 2006 at 1:47 am
Greensatya:
Thanks.I enjoy your encouragement.
Duhita said,
September 15, 2006 at 8:01 am
Paints a lovely picture:) Nice!
dwaipayan said,
September 15, 2006 at 8:27 am
kya sunilbabu?? nayi poem…bariya hain
Obi Wan said,
September 15, 2006 at 10:16 am
senti!!! senti!!!
educatedunemployed said,
September 15, 2006 at 11:36 am
Duhita:
Thanks.
Dwaipayan:
Kaun Sunil babu?
Obiwan:
Is it?!
Rohit Talwar said,
September 15, 2006 at 12:16 pm
What the **** are you doing in Medicine! Write more and get published, woman!
Gangadhar said,
September 15, 2006 at 5:02 pm
dat’s beautiful!
adi said,
September 15, 2006 at 5:48 pm
well said doc…
hope to c u someday in delhidreams
educatedunemployed said,
September 15, 2006 at 9:44 pm
Rohit:
That is my first love.I think I am writing too much and not doing enough Medicine.
Gangdhar:
Thank-you.
Adi:
Thanks.You will most definitely do.
Rohit Talwar said,
September 15, 2006 at 10:50 pm
It’s okay to give attention to things you like other than your first love you know!
sharda said,
September 16, 2006 at 12:27 am
Your poem reminds me of some thing.Very fascinating.
educatedunemployed said,
September 16, 2006 at 3:12 am
Rohit:
I’d agree.
Sharda:
Some thing good?Wanna shed some light over what is so fascinating?
Ford Prefect said,
September 16, 2006 at 6:05 pm
Awesome … If they ask you to write a poen in your exam , youll ace the test
Ford Prefect said,
September 16, 2006 at 6:05 pm
Awesome … If they ask you to write a poen in your exam , youll ace the test
Koi Pahailee said,
September 16, 2006 at 7:05 pm
//Can we recreate the magic,that
Which was yours and mine.//
i would say, OF COURSE you can
its all in your mind…your will power…
dont ask…just try and dont loose it in your mind…
dwaipayan said,
September 16, 2006 at 8:22 pm
oh!!it was a popular ad..but I forgot tht you wouldn’t be able to recognize an indian ad
educatedunemployed said,
September 17, 2006 at 12:34 am
Ford Prefect:
Thank-you..
(keep the obnoxiousness coming)
Koi Paheli:
Yeah that is a thought..Will try..
Dwaipayan:
Nothing to do with an Indian ad. Im not much of a TV person.I wouldn’t really know.
MellowDrama said,
September 17, 2006 at 2:31 pm
I do so love poetry I can understand
educatedunemployed said,
September 19, 2006 at 3:27 am
Mellowdrama:
Nice to know.:)